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Book Review

The Aves by Ryane Nicole Granados

by on October 24, 2024

The Aves, Ryane Nicole Granados’ debut YA novella is a coming of age story of a Black girl in a South Central neighborhood in Los Angeles in the 70’s. The Aves pays tribute to Black women sisterhood while dropping wisdom in gorgeous language. What I most cherish from Granados’ delicate prose stands out in tight curls decorated with barrettes.

This opening passage sets the reminiscent tone and the pre-teen female voice that carries throughout.

“… I wore my hair in three pigtails. Mercy parted two in the back and left one on the top of my head, which she brushed to either the left or the right side. She snapped plastic barrettes on the end of each braid and coordinated the colors to match my outfit for the day.”

The main character Zora Neale Rebecca Hunter sits at a salon to have her hair straightened with hot iron rods, which brings memories of the coming of age ritual in the life of Black girls. The description of this event laced with the girl’s reactions and emotions take up the first four pages, indicating that having her hair done at a salon for the first time became part of her identity.

Hair plays an important role in this brief and powerful tale of sisterhood. Hair not only marks their entrance into womanhood. Additionally, it serves as an instrument to express the Black woman identity.

“Sauda’s only daughter, Imani, is two years older than me and she once claimed she was a direct descendant from royalty because she had true African blood in her. She said … my hair was too fine and slippery to come from pure Black ancestry. … It was settled we were both African Princesses. We pricked our fingers and mixed royal bloodlines to make our nobility official.”

In The Aves, Black women’ hair comes in all textures to display their femininity.

“If I owned her windstorm of hair, … I would run my hand from scalp to hair’s end and roll each strand around my index finger to get the attention of the cute older boys. . . I would never, no matter what my sisters did, or mother did, or brothers expected, of father demanded, wrap it away from the eyes of the world.”

Although there are some male characters in the story, they do not move the plot. They are the dark shadow on Imani’s life, or a fictionalized memory of Zora’s father, or a young husband, Tomi marrying the girl who grew out of the foster care, or Zora’s brother, James, who only has a few lines of dialogue instigating conflict between mother and sisters, or a homeless man writing a thank you note. The only male character with some significant participation is the neighborhood thief who acts as some sort of Black Santa Claus. He is funny and caricatured.

In contrast, women are the protagonists of the action, the ones that twist the plot, who make things happen. The readers never see the shadow of the man holding Imani captive, but we certainly see Mercy’s action that liberates the 15 year old from her dark life. We see Luisa, the girl fighting the boy in the middle of the neighborhood with all the toxic passion learned from her dysfunctional parents.

The reader can also see a working class, African American neighborhood in South Central LA, not far from the LAX airport, where airplanes are so close their noise interrupt an afternoon game. These are one or two parent households. At least one character has outgrown the foster care system. They have their dysfunctionalities that serve as neighborhood evening entertainment. They celebrate their joy and small accomplishments. Homelessness has already made its appearance in this 70’s setting, but even the most innocent and fragile character does not feel threatened by a poor man living on the streets. The thief plays Santa, but the single mother with high moral standards can’t accept those gifts. Granados has treated this neighborhood with the same love and sense of nostalgia that she treated her best female characters; thus, she reinforces the power of community in creating a strong African American identity.

Although Granados never deviates from showing us The Aves through the eyes of  a pre-teen girl, it is through the master use of dialogue that the author drops adult wisdom.

“Regret is a wasted emotion, Zora. Envision a life that when you grow old you will one day want to remember, and then spend the time in between making that life come true.”

With its textured hair and bold female characters, Ryane Nicole Granados laces a sweet and brief story of sisterhood. The Aves touched my heart with a reminiscent tone bringing up the shared memories of rites of passage for Black girls. The young reader will be delighted to find a character that looks like her and feels like her. I am sure Middle Grade readers, especially Black girls, will cherish The Aves as much as their souvenir barrettes. 

The Aves by Ryane Nicole Granados is available now through Leapfrog Press

Lisbeth Coiman is a bilingual author and an avid reader. Her debut book, I Asked the Blue Heron: A Memoir (2017) explores the intersection between immigration and mental health. Her poetry collection, Uprising / Alzamiento (Finishing Line Press, 2021) raises awareness of the humanitarian crisis in her homeland. Her book reviews have been published in the New York Journal of Books, in Citron Review and The Compulsive Reader, LibroMobile, and Cultural Daily to name a few. She lives in Los Angeles, where she works and hikes.

Book Review

The Electric Love Song of Fleischl Berger

by on August 2, 2024

Elusive Love, Loss, and Healing in the Electrifying Story of Psychiatric Treatment

As a writer who suffers from a mental disorder, I was immediately drawn to The Electric Love Song of Fleischl Berger, by David Rocklin, which tells us about the fictionalized life of a Jewish-German psychiatrist born under electrifying circumstances on the shores of the Baltic Sea.

A fascinating reading, The Electric Love Song of Fleischl Berger speaks about a man’s obsession with his own near-death experience, which led him to design the early versions of the Electroencephalogram (EEG). The novel also links EEG to the birth of the motion picture industry at the turn of the century. 

Few historical novels can keep the weight of the facts as the backdrop of the story. David Rocklin masterfully develops an intriguing plot that takes place between the Great War and the rise of the Nazi Germany, while presenting the history of psychiatric treatment in an imaginative love story without overwhelming the reader with historical facts. Instead, the historic events depicted in the story function as catalyst for plot development.

The novel grabs the reader with suspense from the opening line,

“The first time Fleischl Berger almost died…”

With the word “almost” David Rocklin sets a tone of anticipation and commits the reader to the entire story, which delves into each stage of this man’s life his historical backdrop.

Fleischl Berger is raised by a grief ridden father and mentored by the men in his community: a rabbi, a merchant, and a psychiatrist all of whom influenced the young man’s devotion to service. Gifted with the power of attentive listening and empathy, Fleischl discovers that he can help others recover from their emotional wounds, if not actually heal them. In his mentor’s words, 

“…in the end all men of psychiatry do is tend their wounds. We can’t heal anything.”

Eventually young Fleischl Berger falls in love with the merchant’s daughter, but as circumstances will have it, their love is interrupted by Fleischl’s decision to find his father, who is lost at sea. Shortly after, Fleischl nearly dies in an accident during a military exercise.

Fleischl Berger becomes obsessed with the experience in the aftermath of the explosion that almost killed him. Inspired by the creative spirit of his childhood friend and lover, he designs a machine to capture brain activity to explain what happened to him. Thus he creates a scientific instrument that will eventually revolutionize neurological research.

He carries out these extraordinary experiments as movie productions–and his justification to try to observe the human mind more closely.

“To the addled mind,” he said as the audience watched him closely, “illusions are real. They are the world left to them. To us, such people are lost in a world of their own. We try talking to them, but we can’t get through. We try showing them things they ought to know. Their wives, husbands, children, homes, even their own reflections. It’s as if they see something we can’t. Or else they see nothing at all. Our sounds and visions are no longer theirs. How can we reach them?

“I have a way. We give their minds something else. A piece of them that they’ve lost, only at undeniable levels to pry the window of their mind open. I’ve seen it happen – “

“… But this work will help those we think we’ve lost to injury, infirmity, to psychosis. I believe it with all my heart. And I’m here with your kind permission to show you. The louder and brighter the sounds and visions, the wider the window.”

As Fleischl explains his controversial and dramatic experiments with altruistic arguments, he paves the way to unprecedented progress in neuroscience.

Meanwhile, hidden in Berlin’s theatrical scene of the early 1900s, the elusive lover observes Fleischl growing as a scientist and entering the most influential circles of Berlin’s society. As he finds financial support for his experiments, Fleischl gets entangled in social intrigue and power struggles foreign to his personal search, but that will be crucial in his survival.

First the reader must understand that for Fleischl survival means more than beating death. Fleischl’s actions are driven by a sense of loss: the mother who died at his birth, the father who disappeared at sea, the lover who left after he broke her heart,

“I miss home,” he said, because he wasn’t sure what he felt and had nothing else to say that might explain the hole where surely something ought to be.” 

The novel carries this nostalgic tone, a longing for what does not exist anymore.

The setting helps create the nostalgic tone. This is particularly true at the beginning where the laconic landscape of a village on the shores of the Baltic Sea sets the tone with which the young Fleischl will grow. The sea appears first on view, dangerous, dark. It is followed by a row of small, rudimentary buildings, functional for a basic life where the merchants do business near the house where he grows. On top of a hill, sits the asylum that will inspire Fleischl’s vocation for healing. However, the setting also serves as a plot catalyst. Later in the story, the rough sea scenes set the tone for dramatic turns and plot twists. And when Fleischl moves to Berlin, the busy urban landscape of the turn of the century accelerates the action as the social scene moves between small theater venues, ball rooms, mansions, and academic lecture halls.

In The Electric Love Song of Fleischl Berger, David Rocklin gifts us with simple phrases filled with wisdom, like aphorisms,

“You will fail and fail, and with luck one day succeed. Go fail, Fleischl Berger.”

With these phrases, Rocklin offers the reader an opportunity for reflection, enriching the reading experience.

Fleischl Berger’s journey is the story of an extraordinary man, the history of the ECG, and historical fiction of a crucial moment in German history. But ultimately, what held me turning pages is David Rocklin’s ability to weave in the historical facts in fictional narrative using a love story as a thread. In his own words, 

“Do you want to know a secret I learned, Ava? All stories are woven with love. Maybe when all the stories come to have their silences broken, when they come to be heard, they come to those who love them. Who listens just for them.”

Perhaps what I love more about The Electric Love Song of Fleischl Berger is the way this historical novel drew me to learn more about the man, and what is not in the story: the scientific research behind contemporary psychiatric treatment, and the creation of the instrument widely used today in the diagnosis of neurological conditions. By far, The Electric Love Song of Fleischl Berger is one of the best stories I have read in 2024.

The Electric Love Song of Fleischl Berger by David Rocklin is available now through Thane & Prose

Lisbeth Coiman is a bilingual author and an avid reader. Her debut book, I Asked the Blue Heron: A Memoir (2017) explores the intersection between immigration and mental health. Her poetry collection, Uprising / Alzamiento (Finishing Line Press, 2021) raises awareness of the humanitarian crisis in her homeland. Her book reviews have been published in the New York Journal of Books, in Citron Review and The Compulsive Reader, LibroMobile, and Cultural Daily to name a few. She lives in Los Angeles, where she works and hikes.